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Sunday, May 31, 2015
Thursday, May 28, 2015
Percy Jackson Writing Assignment
Percy Jackson Writing Test
Lots of Sweet Silent Writing Time
(Would you like to watch these scenes again, before you talk with your group about them and write your individual answers?
1. Why does Grover tells Charon to hire an interior decorator? (1:22)
2. How does the interior of Luke's cabin reveal something about who he is? (43'20")
3. How does Luke's cabin differ from Percy's cabin? (26'00")
4. Why is Luke's cabin stocked with video games and things he'd stolen from Hermes, his father?
5. What, in Percy's cabin comes from his father, Poseidon?
6. What is the meaning found in the differences between the Luke's and Percy's cabins?
7. What is it about Gabe's apartment where Sally and Percy live that is both comfortable and uncomfortable? (7'46")
7. What is it about Gabe's apartment where Sally and Percy live that is both comfortable and uncomfortable? (7'46")
Wednesday, May 27, 2015
The Black Snake" by Mary Oliver E & G Band
June , 2015 E & G
Ten Sweet Short Silent Minutes of Writing About Time #14
Which came first: the straight line or the curve?
0. When you think about "time" what picture do
you see in your mind?
1. Is time straight, purposeful, and to the point, like an arrow?
2. Or is time cyclical? Like the wheels on the bus, going round and round, as the seasons do?
3. Is Music a way of making time have sound?
4. Is the musical scale like an arrow or is it a cycle?
5. Does thinking about time every make you thirsty, or hungry, or worried?
6. What time is it now? (Write out your answer in a full sentence, for example, "It is eleven o'clock.)
5. Now what time is it?
4. And now?
3. Does time stop when you write?
2. Does "now" last longer than time, when you write?
1. Is it easier to go back in time than it is to go forward?
0. What time will it be when you next look at the time?
AIM: Why did the poet choose to write about a late snake?
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The Black Snake
When the black snake
flashed onto the morning road,
and the truck could not swerve—
death, that is how it happens.
Now he lies looped and useless
as an old bicycle tire.
I stop the car
and carry him into the bushes.
He is as cool and gleaming
as a braided whip, he is as beautiful and quiet
as a dead brother.
I leave him under the leaves
and drive on, thinking
about death: its suddenness,
its terrible weight,
its certain coming. Yet under
reason burns a brighter fire, which the bones
have always preferred.
It is the story of endless good fortune.
It says to oblivion: not me!
It is the light at the center of every cell.
It is what sent the snake coiling and flowing forward
happily all spring through the green leaves before
it came to the road.
- Mary Oliver
Directions:
1. Let each person in your group read the poem aloud to the group.
2. After each reading ask yourselves two essential questions
(a) “What is the poem getting me to think about?”
(b) “What emotions does the poet feel as the poem moves from the beginning to the end?”
Now, since you have read and talked about the poem a few times, turn your attention to the following thirteen questions and do your best to agree with each other on your answers.
NOTE: Each group will have an opportunity to present their ideas to class for a grade.
Grading: (a) To receive a grade, you must present. (b) To receive a grade, you must show you are listening to the group that is making its presentation. (Noisy groups who don’t listen get a zero for class participation. Groups that don’t present get goose eggs written in the grade book.)
1. How many lines in each stanza and how many stanzas are there in this poem?
2. Which stanza contains the word “oblivion”?
3. Which definition best defines the word “oblivion” as it is used in the poem?
(a) the state of being unaware or unconscious of what is happening:
(b) the state of being forgotten
(c) extinction
(d) all three meanings are found in the poem
4. Using evidence from the poem, explain your answer to number 3.
5. Which words and phrases does the poet use to communicate the world of nature?
6. Which words and phrases does the poet use to communicate the man-made world?
7. Which images does the poet use to indicate the conflict between the man-made world and nature?
8. What does the snake symbolize in the poem?
9. What does the road symbolize in the poem?
10. What does the poet think after she gets back into the car and drives on the road?
11. When you think about how time moves through life, is it more like a snake (in coils and cycles) or more like an arrow? What does the poem suggest? Use evidence.
11. When you think about how time moves through life, is it more like a snake (in coils and cycles) or more like an arrow? What does the poem suggest? Use evidence.
12. Give a brief summary of the story of the poem.
13. Why does the snake cross the road?
E & G
Percy and Perseus are of course heroes.
AIM: Why is the Black Snake in the poem heroic?
Ten Minutes of Silent Sweet Writing
The second greatest and most terrible monster anyone can do battle with is boredom. But, the worst and most terrible monster is the idea of being forgotten becoming a fact.
Gosh! After all the efforts and suffering we go through in life, shouldn't we be at least remembered for something? So the soul won't disappear into nothing? Is that fair? What can we do???
1. What amazing thing would you like to do to make sure that the monster of being forgotten won't trap you in it's jaws pull you out of memory?
2. What will you do so people in the future will be glad you lived, even if life is short, here on earth?
3. What accomplishment will go next to your name?
Monday, May 11, 2015
Gorilla, My Love
Gorilla, My Love
BY TONI CADE BAMBARA (March 25, 1939 – December 9, 1995)
That was the year Hunca Bubba changed his name. Not a change up, but a change back, since Jefferson Winston Vale was the name in the first place. Which was news to me cause he'd been my Hunca Bubba my whole lifetime, since I couldn't manage Uncle to save my life. So far as I was concerned it was a change completely to somethin soundin very geographical weather like to me, like somethin you'd find in a almanac. Or somethin you'd run across when you sittin in the navigator seat with a wet thumb on the map crinkly in your lap, watchin the roads and signs so when Granddaddy Vale say "Which was, Scout," you got sense enough to say take the next exit or take a left or whatever it is. Not that Scout's my name. Just the name Granddaddy call whoever sittin in the navigator seat. Which is usually me cause I don't feature sittin in the back with the pecans. Now, you figure pecans all right to be sittin with. If you thinks so, that's your business. But they dusty sometime and make you cough. And they got a way of slidin around and down sudden, like maybe a rat in the buckets, So if you scary like me, you sleep with the lights on and blame it on Baby Jason and, so as not to waste good electric, you study the maps. And that's how come I'm in the navigator seat most times and get to be called Scout.
So Hunca Bubba in the back with the pecans and Baby Jason, and he in love. And we got to hear all this stuff about this woman he in love with and all. Which really ain't enough to keep the mind alive, though Baby Jason got no better sense than to give his undivided attention and keep grabbin at the photograph which is just a picture of some skinny woman in a countrified dress with her hand shot up to her face like she shame fore cameras. But there's a movie house in the background which I ax about. Cause I am a movie freak from way back, even though it do get me in trouble sometime.
Like when me and Big Brood and Baby Jason was on our own last Easter and couldn't go to the Dorset cause we'd seen all the Three Stooges they was. And the RKO Hamilton was closed readying up for the Easter Pageant that night. And the West End, the Regun and the Sunset was too far, less we had grownups with us which we didn't. So we walk up Amsterdam Avenue to the Washington and Gorilla, My Love playin, they say which suit me just fine, thought the "my love" part kinda drag Big Brood some. As for Baby Jason, shoot, like Granddaddy say, he'd follow me into the fiery furnace if I say come on. So we go in and get three bags of Havmore potato chips which not only are the best potato chips but the best bags for blowin up and bustin real loud so the matron come trottin down the aisle with her chunky self, flashin that flashlight dead in your eye so you can give her some lip, and if she answer back and you already finish seein the show anyway, why then you just turn the place out. Which I love to do, no lie. With Baby Jason kickin at the seat in front, egging me on, and Big Brood mumblin bout what fiercesome things we goin do. Which means me. Like when the big boys come up on us talkin bout Lemme a nickel. It's me the hide the money. Or when the bad boys in the park take Big Brood's Spaudeen way from him. It's me that jump on they back and fight awhile. And it's me that turns out the show if the matron get too salty.
So the movie come on and right away it's this churchy music and clearly not about no gorilla. Bout Jesus. And I am ready to kill, not cause I got anything gainst Jesus. Just that when you fixed to watch a gorilla picture you don't wanna get messed around with Sunday School stuff. So I am mad. Besides, we see the raggedy old brown film King of Kings every year and enough's enough. Grownups figure they can treat you just anyhow. Which burns me up. There I am, my feet up and my Havmore potato chips really salty and crisp and two jawbreakers in my lap and the money safe in my shoe from the big boys, and here comes this Jesus stuff. So we all go wild. Yellin, booin, stompin and carryin on. Really to wake the man in the booth up there who musta went to sleep and put on the wrong reels. But no, cause holler down to shut up and then he turn the sound up so we really gotta holler like crazy to even hear ourselves good. And the matron ropes off the children section and flashes her light all over the place and we yell some more and some kids slip under the rope and run up and down the aisle just to show it take more than some dust ole velvet rope to tie us down. And I'm flingin the kid in front of me's popcorn. And Baby Jason kickin seats. And it's really somethin. Then here come the big and matron, the one they let out in case of emergency. And she totin that flashlight like she gonna use it on somebody. This here the colored matron Brandy and her friends call Thunderbuns. She do not play. She do not smile. So we shut up and watch the simple ass picture.
Which is not so simple as it is stupid. Cause I realize that just about anybody in my family is better than this god they always talkin about. My daddy wouldn't stand for nobody treatin any of us that way. My mama specially. And I can just see it now, Big brood up there on the cross askin bout Forgive them Daddy cause they don't know what they doin. And my Mama say Get on down from there you big fool, whatcha think this is, playtime? And my Daddy yellin to Granddaddy to get him a ladder cause Big Brood actin the fool, his mother side of the family showin up. And my mama and her sister Daisy jumpin on them Romans beatin them with they pocketbooks. And Hunca Bubba tellin them folks on they knees they better get out the way and go get some help or they goin to get trampled on. And Granddaddy Vale sayin Leave the boy alone, if that's what he wants to do with his life we ain't got nothin to say about it. Then Aunt Daisy givin him a taste of the pocketbook, fussin bout what a damn fool old man Granddaddy is. Then everybody jumpin in his chest like the time Uncle Clayton went in the army and come back with only one leg and Granddaddy say somethin stupid about that's life. And by this time Big Brood off the cross and in the park playin handball or skully or somethin. And the family in the kitchen throwin dishes at each other, screamin bout if you hadn't done this I wouldn't had to do that. And me in the parlor trying to do my arithmetic yellin Shut it off.
Which is what I was yellin all by myself which make me a sittin target for Thunderbuns. But when I yell We want our money back, that gets everybody in chorus. And the movie windin up with this heavenly cloud music and the smart-ass up there in his hole in the wall turns up the sound again to drown us out. Then there comes Bugs Bunny which we already seen so we know we been had. No gorilla my nuthin. And Big Brood say Awwww Sheeet, we goin to see the manager and get our money back. An I know from this we business. So I brush the potato chips out of my hair which is where Baby Jason like to put em, and I march myself up the aisle to deal with the manger who is a crook in the first place for lyin out there sayin Gorilla, My Love playin. And I never did like the man cause he oily and pasty at the same time like the bad guy in the serial, the one that got a hideout behind a push-button bookcase and play "Moonlight Sonata" with gloves on. I knock on the door and I am furious. And I am alone, too. Cause Big Brood suddenly got to go so bad even though my mama told us bout goin in them nasty bathrooms. And I hear him sigh like he disgusted when he get to the door and see only a little kid there. And now I'm really furious cause I get so tired grownups messin over kids just cause they little and can't take em to court. What is it, he say to me like I lost my mittens or wet on myself or am somebody's retarded child. When in reality I am the smartest kid P.S. 186 ever had in its whole lifetime and you can ax anybody. Even them teachers that don't like me cause I won't sing them Southern songs or back off when they tell me my questions are out of order. And cause my Mama come up there in a minute when them teachers start playin the dozens behind colored folks. She stalk in with her hat pulled down bad and that Persian lamb coat draped back over one hip on account of she got her fist planted there so she can talk that talk which gets us all hypnotized and teacher be comin undone cause she know this could be her job and her behind cause Mama got pull with the Board and bad by her own self anyhow.
So I kick the door open wider and just walk right by him and sit down and tell the man about himself and that I want my money back and that goes for Baby Jason and Big Brood too. And he still trying to shuffle me out the door even though I'm sittin which shows him for the fool he is. Just like the teachers do fore they realize Mama like a stone on that spot and ain't backin up. So he ain't gettin up off the money. So I was forced to leave, takin the matches from under his ashtray, and set fire under the candy stand, which closed the raggedy ole Washington down for a week. My Daddy had the suspect it was me cause Big Brood got a big mouth. But I explained right quick what the whole thing was about and I figured it was even-steven. Cause if you say Gorilla, My Love, you suppose to mean it. Just like when you say you goin to give me a party on my birthday, you gotta mean it. And it you say me and Baby Jason can go South pecan haulin with Granddaddy Vale, you better not be comin up with no stuff about the weather look uncertain or did you mop the bathroom or any other trickified business. I mean even gangsters in the movies say My word is my bond. So don't nobody get away with nothin far as I'm concerned. So Daddy put his belt back on. Cause that's the way I was raised. Like my Mama say in one of them situations when I won't back down, Okay Badbird, you right. Your point is well-taken. Not that Badbird my name, just what she say when she tired arguin and know I'm right. And Aunt Jo, who is the hardest head in the family and worse even than Aunt Daisy, she say, You absolutely right Miss Muffin, which also ain't my real name but the name she gave me one time when I got some medicine shot in my behind and wouldn't get up off her pillows for nothin. And even Granddaddy Vale-who got no memory to speak of, so sometime you can just plain lie to him, if you want to be like that-he say, Well if that's what I said, then that's it. But this name business was different they said. It wasn't like Hunca Bubba had gone back on his word or anything. Just that he was thinkin bout gettin married and was usin his real name now. Which ain't the way I saw it at all.
So there I am in the navigator seat. And I turn to him and just plain ole ax him. I mean I come right on out with it. No sense goin all around that barn the old folks talk about. And like my mama say, Hazel- which is my real name and what she remembers to call me when she bein serious-when you got somethin on your mind, speak up and let the chips fall where they may. And if anybody don't like it, tell em to come see your mama. And Daddy look up from the paper and say, You hear your mama good, Hazel. And tell em to come see me first. Like that. That's how I was raised.
So I turn clear round in the navigator seat and say, "Look here, Hunca Bubba or Jefferson Windsong Vale or whatever you name is, you gonna marry this girl?"
"Sure am," he say, all grins.
And I say, "Member that time you was baby-sittin me when we lived at four-o-nine and there was this big snow and Mama and Daddy got held up in the country so you had to stay for two days?"
And he say, "Sure do."
"Well. You remember how you told me I was the cutest thing that ever walked the earth?"
"Oh, you were real cute when you were little," he say, which is suppose to be funny. I am not laughin.
"Well. You remember what you said?"
And Grandaddy Vale squintin over the wheel and axin which way, Scout. But Scout is busy and don't care if we all get lost for days.
"Watcha mean, Peaches?"
"My name is Hazel. And what I mean is you said you were going to marry me when I grew up. You were going to wait. That's what I mean, my dear Uncle Jefferson." And he don't say nuthin. Just look at me real strange like he never saw me before in life. Like he lost in some weird town in the middle of night and lookin for directions and there's no one to ask. Like it was me that messed up the maps and turned the roads posts round. "Well, you said it, didn't you?" And Baby Jason lookin back and forth like we playin ping-pong. Only I ain't playin. I'm hurtin and I can hear that I am screamin. And Grandaddy Vale mumblin how we never gonna get to where we goin if I don't turn around and take my navigator job serious.
"Well, for cryin out loud, Hazel, you just a little girl. And I was just teasin."
"'And I was just teasin,'" I say back just how he said it so he can hear what a terrible thing it is. Then I don't say nuthin. And he don't say nuthin. And Baby Jason don't say nuthin nohow. Then Granddaddy Vale speak up. "Look here, Precious, it was Hunca Bubba what told you them things. This here, Jefferson Winston Vale." And Hunca Bubba say, "That's right. That was somebody else. I'm a new somebody."
"You a lyin dawg," I say, when I meant to say treacherous dog. But just couldn't get hold of the word. It slipped away from me. And I'm crying and crumplin down in the seat and just don't care. And Granddaddy say to hush and steps on the gas. And I'm losin my bearins and don't even know where to look on the map cause I can't see for cryin. And Baby Jason cryin too. Cause he is my blood brother and understands that we must stick together or be forever lost, what with grownups playin change-up and turnin you round every which way so bad. And don't even say they sorry.
Thursday, May 7, 2015
The Lesson by Toni Cade Bambara
Before you read:
The narrator, remembering that she used to be a young "know-it-all," focuses on a particular day when an unusual neighbor shows her and her friends the wealthy section in Manhattan, all along Fifth Avenue.Sylvia, (the narrator), reconstructs the memory and by doing so, realizes she had learned a valuable lesson that day.
Something wonderful happens to the reader, also, because we're on the journey too. It's a school trip in the summer made for students when there is no school but for students who are in school reading about wishing they were back in the days of summer.
Sylvia as a surprising character: She takes the first real step toward maturity by having the courage to be honest with herself and by admitting to herself that she doesn't know as much as she thought she did. She won't let fear diminish who she is in life.
What helps Sylvia (and the reader) to mature?
How does writing and reading serve to unlock the truth in a more powerful way than talking can?
Note how the tones of voices and what the characters say make this more of an outloud, in your face, up close and personal type of story where how you perform it matters, rather than "a sit in a chair and read silently story" - you follow me?
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The Lesson
Back in the days when everyone was old and stupid or young and foolish and me and Sugar were the only ones just right, this lady moved on our block with nappy hair and proper speech and no makeup. And quite naturally we laughed at her, laughed the way we did at the junk man who went about his business like he was some big-time president and his sorry-ass horse his secretary. And we kinda hated her too, hated the way we did the winos who cluttered up our parks and pissed on our handball walls and stank up our hallways and stairs so you couldn't halfway play hide-and-seek without a goddamn gas mask. Miss Moore was her name. The only woman on the block with no first name. And she was black as hell, cept for her feet, which were fish-white and spooky. And she was always planning these boring-ass things for us to do, us being my cousin, mostly, who lived on the block cause we all moved North the same time and to the same apartment then spread out gradual to breathe. And our parents would yank our heads into some kinda shape and crisp up our clothes so we'd be presentable for travel with Miss Moore, who always looked like she was going to church though she never did. Which is just one of the things the grownups talked about when they talked behind her back like a dog. But when she came calling with some sachet she'd sewed up or some gingerbread she'd made or some book, why then they'd all be too embarrassed to turn her down and we'd get handed over all spruced up. She'd been to college and said it was only right that she should take responsibility for the young ones' education, and she not even related by marriage or blood. So they'd go for it. Specially Aunt Gretchen. She was the main gofer in the family. You got some ole dumb shit foolishness you want somebody to go for, you send for Aunt Gretchen. She been screwed into the go-along for so long, it's a blood-deep natural thing with her. Which is how she got saddled with me and Sugar and Junior in the first place while our mothers were in a la-de-da apartment up the block having a good ole time.
So this one day Miss Moore rounds
us all up at the mailbox and it's puredee hot and she's knockin herself out
about arithmetic. And school suppose to let up in summer I heard, but she don't
never let up. And the starch in my pinafore scratching the shit outta me and
I'm really hating this nappy-head bitch and her goddamn college degree. I'd
much rather go to the pool or to the show where it's cool. So me and Sugar
leaning on the mailbox being surly, which is a Miss Moore word. And Flyboy
checking out what everybody brought for lunch. And Fat Butt already wasting his
peanut-butter-and-jelly sandwich like the pig he is. And Junebug punchin on
Q.T.'s arm for potato chips. And Rosie Giraffe shifting from one hip to the
other waiting for somebody to step on her foot or ask her if she from Georgia
so she can kick ass, preferably Mercedes'. And Miss Moore asking us do we know
what money is like we a bunch of retards. I mean real money, she say, like it's
only poker chips or monopoly papers we lay on the grocer. So right away I'm
tired of this and say so. And would much rather snatch Sugar and go to the
Sunset and terrorize the West Indian kids and take their hair ribbons and their
money too. And Miss Moore files that remark away for next week's lesson on
brotherhood, I can tell. And finally I say we oughta get to the subway cause
it's cooler an' besides we might meet some cute boys. Sugar done swiped her
mama's lipstick, so we ready.
So we heading down the street and
she's boring us silly about what things cost and what our parents make and how
much goes for rent and how money ain't divided up right in this country. And
then she gets to the part about we all poor and live in the slums which I don't
feature. And I'm ready to speak on that, but she steps out in the street and
hails two cabs just like that. Then she hustles half the crew in with her and
hands me a five-dollar bill and tells me to calculate 10 percent tip for the
driver. And we're off. Me and Sugar and Junebug and Flyboy hangin out the
window and hollering to everybody, putting lipstick on each other cause Flyboy
a faggot anyway, and making farts with our sweaty armpits. But I'm mostly
trying to figure how to spend this money. But they are fascinated with the
meter ticking and Junebug starts laying bets as to how much it'll read when
Flyboy can't hold his breath no more. Then Sugar lays bets as to how much it'll
be when we get there. So I'm stuck. Don't nobody want to go for my plan, which
is to jump out at the next light and run off to the first bar-b-que we can
find. Then the driver tells us to get the hell out cause we there already. And
the meter reads eighty-five cents. And I'm stalling to figure out the tip and
Sugar say give him a dime. And I decide he don't need it bad as I do, so later
for him. But then he tries to take off with Junebug foot still in the door so
we talk about his mama something ferocious. Then we check out that we on Fifth
Avenue and everybody dressed up in stockings. One lady in a fur coat, hot as it
is. White folks crazy.
"This is the place, "
Miss Moore say, presenting it to us in the voice she uses at the museum.
"Let's look in the windows before we go in."
"Can we steal?" Sugar
asks very serious like she's getting the ground rules squared away before she
plays. "I beg your pardon," say Miss Moore, and we fall out. So she
leads us around the windows of the toy store and me and Sugar screamin,
"This is mine, that's mine, I gotta have that, that was made for me, I was
born for that," till Big Butt drowns us out.
"Hey, I'm goin to buy that
there."
"That there? You don't even
know what it is, stupid."
"I do so," he say
punchin on Rosie Giraffe. "It's a microscope."
"Whatcha gonna do with a
microscope, fool?"
"Look at things."
"Like what, Ronald?" ask
Miss Moore. And Big Butt ain't got the first notion. So here go Miss Moore
gabbing about the thousands of bacteria in a drop of water and the
somethinorother in a speck of blood and the million and one living things in
the air around us is invisible to the naked eye. And what she say that for?
Junebug go to town on that "naked" and we rolling. Then Miss Moore
ask what it cost. So we all jam into the window smudgin it up and the price tag
say $300. So then she ask how long'd take for Big Butt and Junebug to save up
their allowances. "Too long," I say. "Yeh," adds Sugar,
"outgrown it by that time." And Miss Moore say no, you never outgrow
learning instruments. "Why, even medical students and interns and,"
blah, blah, blah. And we ready to choke Big Butt for bringing it up in the
first damn place.
"This here costs four hundred
eighty dollars," say Rosie Giraffe. So we pile up all over her to see what
she pointin out. My eyes tell me it's a chunk of glass cracked with something
heavy, and different-color inks dripped into the splits, then the whole thing
put into a oven or something. But for $480 it don't make sense.
"That's a paperweight made of
semi-precious stones fused together under tremendous pressure," she
explains slowly, with her hands doing the mining and all the factory work.
"So what's a
paperweight?" asks Rosie Giraffe.
"To weigh paper with,
dumbbell," say Flyboy, the wise man from the East.
"Not exactly," say Miss
Moore, which is what she say when you warm or way off too. "It's to weigh
paper down so it won't scatter and make your desk untidy. " So right away
me and Sugar curtsy to each other and then to Mercedes who is more the tidy
type.
"We don't keep paper on top
of the desk in my class," say Junebug, figuring Miss Moore crazy or lyin
one.
"At home, then," she
say. "Don't you have a calendar and a pencil case and a blotter and a
letter-opener on your desk at home where you do your homework?" And she
know damn well what our homes look like cause she nosys around in them every
chance she gets.
"I don't even have a
desk," say Junebug. "Do we?"
"No. And I don't get no
homework neither," says Big Butt.
"And I don't even have a
home," say Flyboy like he do at school to keep the white folks off his
back and sorry for him. Send this poor kid to camp posters, is his specialty.
"I do," says Mercedes.
"I have a box of stationery on my desk and a picture of my cat. My
godmother bought the stationery and the desk. There's a big rose on each sheet
and the envelopes smell like roses."
"Who wants to know about your
smelly-ass stationery," say Rosie Giraffe fore I can get my two cents in.
"It's important to have a
work area all your own so that . . ."
"Will you look at this
sailboat, please," say Flyboy, cuttin her off and pointin to the thing
like it was his. So once again we tumble all over each other to gaze at this
magnificent thing in the toy store which is just big enough to maybe sail two
kittens across the pond if you strap them to the posts tight. We all start
reciting the price tag like we in assembly. "Hand-crafted sailboat of
fiberglass at one thousand one hundred ninety-five dollars."
"Unbelievable," I hear
myself say and am really stunned. I read it again for myself just in case the
group recitation put me in a trance. Same thing. For some reason this pisses me
off. We look at Miss Moore and she lookin at us, waiting for I dunno what.
"Who'd pay all that when you
can buy a sailboat set for a quarter at Pop's, a tube of glue for a dime, and a
ball of string for eight cents? It must have a motor and a whole lot else
besides," I say. "My sailboat cost me about fifty cents."
"But will it take
water?" say Mercedes with her smart ass.
"Took mine to Alley Pond Park
once," say Flyboy. "String broke. Lost it. Pity."
"Sailed mine in Gentral Park
and it keeled over and sank. Had to ask my father for another dollar."
"And you got the strap,"
laugh Big Butt. "The jerk didn't even have a string on it. My old man
wailed on his behind."
Little Q.T. was staring hard at
the sailboat and you could see he wanted it bad. But he too little and
somebody'd just take it from him. So what the hell. "This boat for kids,
Miss Moore?"
"Parents silly to buy
something like that just to get all broke up," say Rosie Giraffe.
"That much money it should
last forever," I figure.
"My father'd buy it for me if
I wanted it."
"Your father, my ass,"
say Rosie Giraffe getting a chance to finally push Mercedes.
"Must be rich people shop
here," say Q.T.
"You are a very bright
boy," say Flyboy. "What was your first clue?" And he rap him on
the head with the back of his knuckles, since Q.T. the only one he could get
away with. Though Q.T. liable to come up behind you years later and get his
licks in when you half expect it.
"What I want to know
is," I says to Miss Moore though I never talk to her, I wouldn't give the
bitch that satisfaction, "is how much a real boat costs? I figure a
thousand'd get you a yacht any day."
"Why don't you check that out,"
she says, "and report back to the group?" Which really pains my ass.
If you gonna mess up a perfectly good swim day least you could do is have some
answers. "Let's go in," she say like she got something up her sleeve.
Only she don't lead the way. So me and Sugar turn the corner to where the
entrance is, but when we get there I kinda hang back. Not that I'm scared,
what's there to be afraid of, just a toy store. But I feel funny, shame. But
what I got to be shamed about? Got as much right to go in as anybody. But
somehow I can't seem to get hold of the door, so I step away from Sugar to
lead. But she hangs back too. And I look at her and she looks at me and this is
ridiculous. I mean, damn, I have never ever been shy about doing nothing or
going nowhere. But then Mercedes steps up and then Rosie Giraffe and Big Butt
crowd in behind and shove, and next thing we all stuffed into the doorway with
only Mercedes squeezing past us, smoothing out her jumper and walking right
down the aisle. Then the rest of us tumble in like a glued-together jigsaw done
all wrong. And people lookin at us. And it's like the time me and Sugar crashed
into the Catholic church on a dare. But once we got in there and everything so
hushed and holy and the candles and the bowin and the handkerchiefs on all the
drooping heads, I just couldn't go through with the plan. Which was for me to
run up to the altar and do a tap dance while Sugar played the nose flute and
messed around in the holy water. And Sugar kept givin me the elbow. Then later
teased me so bad I tied her up in the shower and turned it on and locked her
in. And she'd be there till this day if Aunt Gretchen hadn't finally figured I
was lyin about the boarder takin a shower.
Same thing in the store. We all
walkin on tiptoe and hardly touchin the games and puzzles and things. And I
watched Miss Moore who is steady watchin us like she waitin for a sign. Like
Mama Drewery watches the sky and sniffs the air and takes note of just how much
slant is in the bird formation. Then me and Sugar bump smack into each other,
so busy gazing at the toys, 'specially the sailboat. But we don't laugh and go
into our fat-lady bump-stomach routine. We just stare at that price tag. Then
Sugar run a finger over the whole boat. And I'm jealous and want to hit her.
Maybe not her, but I sure want to punch somebody in the mouth.
"Watcha bring us here for,
Miss Moore?"
"You sound angry, Sylvia. Are
you mad about something?" Givin me one of them grins like she tellin a
grown-up joke that never turns out to be funny. And she's lookin very closely
at me like maybe she plannin to do my portrait from memory. I'm mad, but I
won't give her that satisfaction. So I slouch around the store bein very bored
and say, "Let's go."
Me and Sugar at the back of the
train watchin the tracks whizzin by large then small then gettin gobbled up in
the dark. I'm thinkin about this tricky toy I saw in the store. A clown that
somersaults on a bar then does chin-ups just cause you yank lightly at his leg.
Cost $35. I could see me askin my mother for a $35 birthday clown. "You
wanna who that costs what?" she'd say, cocking her head to the side to get
a better view of the hole in my head. Thirty-five dollars could buy new bunk
beds for Junior and Gretchen's boy. Thirty-five dollars and the whole household
could go visit Grand-daddy Nelson in the country. Thirty-five dollars would pay
for the rent and the piano bill too. Who are these people that spend that much
for performing clowns and $1000 for toy sailboats? What kinda work they do and
how they live and how come we ain't in on it? Where we are is who we are, Miss
Moore always pointin out. But it don't necessarily have to be that way, she
always adds then waits for somebody to say that poor people have to wake up and
demand their share of the pie and don't none of us know what kind of pie she
talking about in the first damn place. But she ain't so smart cause I still got
her four dollars from the taxi and she sure ain't gettin it Messin up my day
with this shit. Sugar nudges me in my pocket and winks.
Miss Moore lines us up in front of
the mailbox where we started from, seem like years ago, and I got a headache
for thinkin so hard. And we lean all over each other so we can hold up under
the draggy ass lecture she always finishes us off with at the end before we
thank her for borin us to tears. But she just looks at us like she readin tea
leaves. Finally she say, "Well, what did you think of F.A.0. Schwarz?"
Rosie Giraffe mumbles, "White
folks crazy."
"I'd like to go there again when
I get my birthday money," says Mercedes, and we shove her out the pack so
she has to lean on the mailbox by herself.
"I'd like a shower. Tiring
day," say Flyboy.
Then Sugar surprises me by sayin,
"You know, Miss Moore, I don't think all of us here put together eat in a
year what that sailboat costs." And Miss Moore lights up like somebody
goosed her. "And?" she say, urging Sugar on. Only I'm standin on her
foot so she don't continue.
"Imagine for a minute what
kind of society it is in which some people can spend on a toy what it would
cost to feed a family of six or seven. What do you think?"
"I think," say Sugar
pushing me off her feet like she never done before cause I whip her ass in a
minute, "that this is not much of a democracy if you ask me. Equal chance
to pursue happiness means an equal crack at the dough, don't it?" Miss
Moore is besides herself and I am disgusted with Sugar's treachery. So I stand
on her foot one more time to see if she'll shove me. She shuts up, and Miss
Moore looks at me, sorrowfully I'm thinkin. And somethin weird is goin on, I
can feel it in my chest. "Anybody else learn anything today?" lookin
dead at me. I walk away and Sugar has to run to catch up and don't even seem to
notice when I shrug her arm off my shoulder.
"Well, we got four dollars
anyway," she says. "Uh hun."
"We could go to Hascombs and
get half a chocolate layer and then go to the Sunset and still have plenty
money for potato chips and ice cream sodas."
"Uh hun."
"Race you to Hascombs,"
she say.
We start down the block and she
gets ahead which is O.K. by me cause I'm going to the West End and then over to
the Drive to think this day through. She can run if she want to and even run
faster. But ain't nobody gonna beat me at nuthin.
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Tuesday, May 5, 2015
Friday May 13-14 A and J Bands Test & Text: The Man Who Was Almost A Man
May 11, 2015
Test
"The Man Who Was Almost A Man"
Directions and Rubric:
Write your answers on loose-leaf.
Skip two lines between each written answer.
Answer each question in complete sentences using your best English and include evidence from the story. No Baloney.
1. Why did the writer wait until the very last page of the story for the main character (Dave) to tell the reader what his last name is?
2. How Does using different dialects of English in the same story make the story both more challenging to read but also more interesting?
3. In your view, using evidence from the story, could Dave also be the Narrator, but older, long after the events of the story had passed?
4. Why does Dave (and the Narrator) compare Dave to Jenny?
5. What shows that Dave's parents deprive him of the opportunity to discover his own sense of purpose?
6. How was Dave able to get onboard the Illinois Central without stopping?
7. At the end of the story, explain how Dave was both running away from one set of responsibilities and toward another set of responsibilities?
8. What is Dave carrying from his past that might make his journey into the future he hopes for a little more difficult for him than he imagines?
9. The title is written like a riddle. Using evidence from the story, solve the riddle.
10. Select one literary technique or device (e.g., foreshadowing, imagery, simile, theme, metaphor) and explain how it enhances the experience of reading the story.
Test
"The Man Who Was Almost A Man"
Directions and Rubric:
Write your answers on loose-leaf.
Skip two lines between each written answer.
Answer each question in complete sentences using your best English and include evidence from the story. No Baloney.
1. Why did the writer wait until the very last page of the story for the main character (Dave) to tell the reader what his last name is?
4. Why does Dave (and the Narrator) compare Dave to Jenny?
6. How was Dave able to get onboard the Illinois Central without stopping?
7. At the end of the story, explain how Dave was both running away from one set of responsibilities and toward another set of responsibilities?
10. Select one literary technique or device (e.g., foreshadowing, imagery, simile, theme, metaphor) and explain how it enhances the experience of reading the story.
Monday, May 4, 2015
The Man Who Was Almost A Man - by Richard Wright - A and J Bands
May 8, 2015
Watch and listen to the following New York Times Documentaries and write a reaction.
‘A Conversation About Growing Up Black’
‘A Conversation With My Black Son’
AIM: Where do you think Dave is headed and what's the first thing he will have to learn to do once he gets there?
May 7, 2015 - A Band and J Band
13 Silent Short Sweet Writing Minutes
Assignment #3
Looking ahead to the year 2045.
Write a letter to yourself that you will receive in 30 years. In it, list, define, and explain four signs that will prove to you, (obviously when you are much older), that your life has had purpose. What are those four things? (possessions, events, adventures, accomplishments) Why are they important?
AIM: What, according to the people around Dave, is Dave's purpose in life? What shows us that Dave is in rebellion against their sense of what his purpose is?Film: Family Conversation scene.
Text: Dave gets the gun.
10 Silent Short Sweet Writing Minutes
Assignment #2
Is "The United States of America" a place or an idea of a way to live?
AIM: Why does Dave get his identity mixed up with Jenny's?
Homework Writing Assignment:
Read the following poem and listen to the song "America" by Simon & Garfunkel.
Explain what the song is trying to say about "looking for America."
"America" by SIMON & GARFUNKEL
"Let us be lovers we'll marry our fortunes together"
"I've got some real estate here in my bag"
So we bought a pack of cigarettes and Mrs. Wagner pies
And we walked off to look for America
"I've got some real estate here in my bag"
So we bought a pack of cigarettes and Mrs. Wagner pies
And we walked off to look for America
"Kathy," I said as we boarded a Greyhound in Pittsburgh
"Michigan seems like a dream to me now"
It took me four days to hitchhike from Saginaw
I've come to look for America
"Michigan seems like a dream to me now"
It took me four days to hitchhike from Saginaw
I've come to look for America
Laughing on the bus
Playing games with the faces
She said the man in the gabardine suit was a spy
I said "Be careful his bowtie is really a camera"
Playing games with the faces
She said the man in the gabardine suit was a spy
I said "Be careful his bowtie is really a camera"
"Toss me a cigarette, I think there's one in my raincoat"
"We smoked the last one an hour ago"
So I looked at the scenery, she read her magazine
And the moon rose over an open field
"We smoked the last one an hour ago"
So I looked at the scenery, she read her magazine
And the moon rose over an open field
"Kathy, I'm lost," I said, though I knew she was sleeping
I'm empty and aching and I don't know why
Counting the cars on the New Jersey Turnpike
They've all gone to look for America
All gone to look for America
All gone to look for America
I'm empty and aching and I don't know why
Counting the cars on the New Jersey Turnpike
They've all gone to look for America
All gone to look for America
All gone to look for America
May 6, 2015 J-Band
Silent Short Sweet Writing Assignment #2
Is a gun in the hand of a bully more or less dangerous than a gun in the hand of someone who gets bullied?
AIM: How is Dave treated by his peers and his parents?
Film: A glimpse at Dave's world: hard work, little encouragement
http://www.amazon.com/Almos-Man-Henry-Fonda/dp/B00UZK4RPO/ref=sr_1_1?s=instant-video&ie=UTF8&qid=1430909070&sr=1-1&keywords=almos+a+man
Extra Credit: How many different "Englishes" are there in the story and why does the author use more than one kind of English?
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